The Art of Rhyming

Beat by Black Milk: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6s8RanB5g4w

It goes like...
Nas right, Hip Hop changed
We went from the golden age to the radio's shame
Only a few real artists even remain
While these, lames get the fame
We're forced undgerground
Where we practice the art of rhyming
....Raps not just a game you play for fun
But something you practice until you become
A perfectionist spittin the insane rhymes
And you've gotta come with the sick flow; at the same time
Gotta have an insane mind to say these rhymes
Gotta connect the words from your mouth to your heart
***** Hip Hops not a game, it's an art

"I know my streets, I know my sounds
Y'all know my beats, how I get down
I take my steps, and leaps and bounds
***** it's - HIP HOP!"

It seems in 2009, everybody wanna rhyme
but what they don't realize
is it takes skill to hold the M-I-C
90% of them out there are wanna-be's
You need to take a break and learn the art of poetry
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And then you've got those Hip Hop critics
say all we ever do is talk about *******
well do you, snitches, listen, or do you just skip it?
I'm sorry I didn't mean to bite a line from Jay
But it seems to be the truth in Hip Hop today
Please learn before you speak don't even get me start (ed)
Hip Hop today is becoming so retard (ed)
Don't make me tear you wack mother ****** apart
Just learn rhyming's not a game; it's an art



"I know my streets, I know my sounds
Y'all know my beats, how I get down
I take my steps, and leaps and bounds
***** it's - HIP HOP!"

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Did I do that right? ^^

Anyway, I just wanna get some feedback on this.