freestyles strong FS

Made Expo's Neck-Touch-His-Knees When I Chopped His-Body-Down Leaving Him Dead-Quickly...
Because The Tecks-Busts-With-Ease Had To Put The-Shotty-Down And Start Spittin Lead-Swiftly...//1
I'm Keyin-All-These-Fiends And Like'Freddy' Kill All Ya Hopes-And-Dreams...
You Aint Ready, Caught Ya Slippin-On-Ya-Knees, Like TLC "So I Creep" As I Plan To Merk And Scope-His-Team...//2 (Lyrical Assassins)
All This Bitch-Do-Is-BackDown, Gonz 'Masson Ya Ancestors' And "Throw Bricks-Threw-Ya-BackGround"...
Comon Kid,-Who-Laugh-Now? I'll Diss-You-Like-That-Clown On 'In *Living Color*' But "INHUMAN's" 'Through-With-That-Now'...//3
'TDK' Starts Tha 'Extinction-Of-Gayz', 'Perrish'n Faggots Wit SP-40' And Depletein-They-Rayz...LA Bitches Gets Eatin-And-Blazed..
Beat-N-Erased, Have Them Screamin-For-Dayz As I 'Torch 'Sleepy' So Bad' His Whole Crew Will Be Flee'in-Tha-Stage,Pleeding-For-Aide...//4-5
I Advance-And-Attack, Give INHUMAN No Chance-To-React To Enhance-And-Come.Back...
Put A Trance-On-This-Cat And 'Crush This Herb' Like "Plants-Gettin-Smashed" He Cant-Get-More-Wack!!!...//6
Keep Ya Insuffceint-N-Useless-Writes...Does He Really Wanna Risk-And-Lose-His-Life? Cuz Gonz Will 'Vanquish And Burn Him' Like "Arsonistic-Musuem-Heists"...//7
Sleepy Displayed Numerous Bars Of Crap-Rhymes, On Audio You Got A Whack-Sound so brace for the Smack-Down...
Like *Chains Of A-Cup Girls* You'll Have *Flat-Lines* Cuz I'll *Put Ya Spine In The Dirt* And Force You To Play The *Back-Ground*...//8(whoa)
Shit I Just Deaded-Ya-Verse, Now I'ma Measure-Ya-Hurste, You Cant Ruin Me You Simpleton...
Because When The Led-Pops Your Gauranteed To Have More *Red-Dots* On Ya Forehead Than A *Community-Of-Indians*...//9
INHUMAN, After This-Is-Done You'll Admit That Men’s Genitals Twist-Ya-Tongue, Rap Dogs come Watch-This-Bitch-Swallowing...
Nobody Trusts-Your-Lies, Get Fucked By So Many Men That They Buss *Nuts-Inside* And Sperms is *Startin To Form Colonies*...//10
'Lightin This Bitch Up' Like My Hands *Hold-Flares*, You proMotin Lies So I Proceed To Watch Ya Genetic Code-Tear...
Just Another 'Blow Out' like *aFro-Hair* But I’ll Leave You With *Polar-Eyes*(Polarized) And Dare You To Ever Give TDK a *Cold-Stare*...//11
Expo Still Breathing??? Damn I Musta-Missed-You, Oh Well, I Can Still Rip Ya Flesh And Blow My Nose On Your Muscle-Tissue...
Such-A-Sinful Human Being, Got The Right-To-Smash-On-This-Line-Crook, Ya Verses Are Shit, I'll Whip-My-Ass-With-Your-Rhyme-Book!!!...//12

Shit was sick kid
but u cant tell me thats a freestyle
structuer was fucked up but im tha same way

I would say wicth lines i like best but theres too many

the strutcure was a fuckin mess you hoenstly need to work on the flow because thats what fucked u up.. the flow and strutcure just looks like a big azz paragraph of talk feel me? and the vocab was original in some areas but you need to elevate not too abd tho

yea man that was tight but ur structure needs a touch of elevating but still good