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My Broken Heart
My heart was broken,
I give u chocolates,
But just as a token,
Of my appreciation,
U told me lies,like George bush,
jus to please the nation,
I had a feelin it would happen,
but jus an inclination,
U cheated,
u enjoyed the thrill as ur heart beated,
I suspected a chump ass lover,
The situation was getin heated,
As i was thinkin wat was goin on,
out of desperation,
i picked up the phone and rang my mom,
and i said,
I need to tell u whats goin on,
she said hold on a minute ur dads jus walked in,
hes in a grumpy ass mood and shouted get me a tin,
Lazy fuk was out of work i wondered where he had bin,
Then she walked in the bitch was smellin of gin,
so shes passed out on the floor,
so i picked up her purse,
to see what was in,
My dads credit card there it was jus lyin in,
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yo this was aight. i like how it ended an it had some imagery but not alot. you need to work on ya flow a lil bit but other than that it was pretty good. peace out dawg
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you pretty good could use some elavation
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