30 LINE MAX..
VERSES DUE FRIDAY,TRY TO HAVE THEM IN BY WEDNESDAY!!
VOTE ON AT LEAST 3 OTHER BATTLES,OR VOTES WILL BE DEDUCTED FROM YOUR BATTLE.
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30 LINE MAX..
VERSES DUE FRIDAY,TRY TO HAVE THEM IN BY WEDNESDAY!!
VOTE ON AT LEAST 3 OTHER BATTLES,OR VOTES WILL BE DEDUCTED FROM YOUR BATTLE.
I will leave you the solemn displeasure of signing in second.
damn the luck
aiight
signing in
Im not sure I'll be able to post up later this week so Ima put up a few bars to make sure theres no no show...
Madd Professor, Unique? I cant tell who's the real Stan,
Smack this clown so hard his name flips...DDAM! DDAM!//
to help you out I'll recycle a punch...you need it for real,
Hit his crew so hard the name flips...and they still not 'I.L.L.'//
Throwin you around, The canvas was the first girl you kissed,
I put those three holes yah name...I was shootin to miss//
The window of opportunity got slammed on your hands,
I point more infra-reds at yah head then fuckin Talibans!//
After the battle fans'll call the cops, 5-0! 5-0! Eminem, please,
Even my tongues murderous...Im 'armed to the teeth'//
madd professor? make up yah creature to battle me chief...
cuz you gonna be like the last two herbs...with a loss next week//
*waves a hand in front of OFF~CENTER's face*
yo dawg, weren't you supposed to diss me?
i saw my name but... oh well... the show must flow on...
i'll title this... open casket... in memory of off~center's defeat...
yo center, what was with the "DAMN! DAMN!"?/
1-800-CHARTER called, fingering yourself while typing is "BAD! BAD!"/
this kid couldn't get off near ill if he was at a nasty nas concert/
off center? more like off record, get yourself a fucking drug sponsor/
this kid couldn't be more off center if he rapped a hap hazard/
nor could he be more behind hiphop if he rhymed backwards/
i disperse twisted verbs to grapple herbs/
so off center couldn't win with a scrabble word/
talking about my name ain't even a battle verse/
even though his rhymes were off topic, i've handled worse/
with "look ma, no hands", off center coudn't be the dopest on the planet/
even if he became a manic-crack-addict sniffing sugar and aphrodisiacs/
aiight, i know i came weak but whatever, ain't my fault i can't rhyme, peace, i matched his 12 lines
signed,
~madd
umm ok in my opinion both verses where weak and did meet up to the llbl
but i have to vote for one here we go
wordplay=mad
punches=tie
flow=OFF
creativity=OFF
effort=from both
both verse where weak as i said but OFF came with beeta flow plus he was betta in more categories
my vote goes to OFF
100
vote on my battle against I.e
i gotta vote off, slightly better punches and wordplay, u both did spit pretty weak though, shit ta work on for nex week.
VOTE-OFF CENTER
Peace.
VOte on me vs azace
To these clowns crying about "weakness:"
I keyed my verse in about fifteen minutes and Im sure Madd Professor didnt take much more...I wsnt sure if I'd be able to post so I threw up some stuff instead of writing for a week and then posting it...Chill out and vote accordingly...
And Illrhymephonetic...I just read your verse and I wanna know who on Gods green earth gave you the right to call other people weak...
2-0 OFF
Vote - Off Center.
Average Verse, Nothing Great & Nothing That Wack. Flow Was Straight, Decent Lines. Madd, In Some Parts I Thought It Was Going To Get Better, But It Didnt.
Decent Battle.
this was a pretty dull battle, but i gotta go with off center on this one because his punches and stuff were a lil bit better then madd professor.
holla
~1~
off center gets my vote sightly better punches and flow both need work on there volcab though
OFF~CeNTeR
- Madd Professor, Unique? I cant tell who's the real Stan,
- Smack this clown so hard his name flips...DDAM! DDAM!//
First line was alright, but the second line was pure filler.
- Even my tongues murderous...Im 'armed to the teeth'//
Ill line. A bit played, but still ill.
•madd•Professor•
- yo center, what was with the "DAMN! DAMN!"?/
- 1-800-CHARTER called, fingering yourself while typing is "BAD! BAD!"/
This was a decent try. But it didn't really work.
- nor could he be more behind hiphop if he rhymed backwards/
Nice wordplay.
This battle goes to Off Center for a more complete verse. He took this kinda easy. Good luck to both MCs in the later rounds.
I agree with everyone else. Off Center had the better verse, plain and simple. All other reasons have been said, no need to repeat.
Vote = Off Center
7-0.
vote off center
had better punches better vocab diss harder
madd shit was coo, but he gotta lot to work on for next week
wasn't 2 much to vote on
good luck to both for next week
peace