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Sacred Scriptures 2006/07: Week 4.
BTK. Vs. K.
YOU CHOOSE YOUR OPPONENTS TOPIC.
Check In Early to Confirm You Will Show.
Verses Due: Sunday 29th October, 11:59PM (Both Sides Of The Pond)
Voting Ends: Wednesday 1st November. (When New Battles Are Made)
TOPICS.(This is a link)
Choose as many topics as you wish.
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Good luck, don't drop late, & make this dope.
ill be niceish ;)
your topic is
"River deep, mountain high".
good luck mate give me somthing good.
And yours is...
At this rate I'll be..
Good luck.
Ike and Tina Turner
River Deep, Mountain High
When I was a little girl I had a rag doll
The only doll I ever owned
Now I love you just the way I loved that rag doll
But only now my love has grown
And it gets stronger in every way
And it gets deeper let me say
And it gets higher day by day
And do I love you?
My oh my, yeah
River deep, mountain high
Yeah yeah yeah
If I lost you
Would I cry?
Oh, I love you baby baby baby baby
When you were a young boy, did you have a puppy?
That always followed you around?
Well, I'm gonna be as faithful as that puppy
No, I'll never, never let you down
Cause it gets stronger as the river flows
And it gets bigger baby and heaven knows
And it gets sweeter baby as it goes
Do I love you?
My oh my!
River deep, mountain high
Yeah yeah yeah
Do I love you?
Would I cry?
Oh, I love you baby baby baby baby
I love you baby like a flower loves the spring
I love you baby like a robin likes to sing
I love you baby like a schoolboy likes his pie
Oh and I love you baby!
River deep, mountain high
Do I love you?
Would I cry?
Oh, I love you baby baby baby baby
Oh, yeah oh yeah...
Ooh, do I love you?
My oh my!
River deep, mountain high
Yeah yeah yeah
Do I love you?
Would I cry?
Oh, I love you baby baby baby baby
River Deep, Mountain High…
I’m in denial that she’s vile...so I’ll stay with her awhile...
Even though...
I’m so beguiled I’m hostile and barely able to smile.
Lip-locked by a master, now I’m rocked and getting plastered...
Press the pedal, going faster as I punch it towards disaster.
Small town born and bred, so I’m easily torn to shreds...
By her hidden horns in bed, every time she spreads her legs.
They don’t fuck like her in the sticks, the way she works my dick...
It hits like a ton of bricks every time she licks this hick.
One day she wasn’t here, the next day she was...
From New York to open frontier, her only reason: “Because”.
Always aloof and vague, just like when we met at the bar...
Treated this goof like the plague, then plays me like a guitar.
Wants nothing from me, then just to fuck me...I’m always on eggshells...
Cuz I’m reeling from the feeling she’s slumming...
..................................And I’m the disgusting guy under her spell.
One day she says she’s leaving, packing up and fleeing...
So I beg, don’t leave me grieving...stay with me for the time being.
She suddenly shows her soul, which I thought was black as coal...
And as I console and hold, she begs me to take control.
Of the loan shark seeking, and our quiet waters reeking...
Informants have been sneaking and local townsfolk speaking.
Millions are owed so death’ll unfold...she’s chum if she stays...
The carcharodon teeth that patrol will find my hon any day.
Then she shows me the money, and it’s enough to make Cuba proud...
Damn, it’s strange and kinda funny...how far love goes and what it allows.
Hammer raised, I’m dazed...but still spring from the shadows...
Impact smacks and I’m amazed, at how easily the skull shows.
A second blow I bestow as blood freely flows and he throws...
Up ooze on my shoes from the bruising abuse his brain knows.
Pick pockets to emphasize robbery, so one one will ever bother me...
He’ll look like he was clobbered, see...when he interrupted a burglary.
Leave his hotel, heart racing...fear escalating, but I’m elated...
Cuz we’ll be together forever cuz of the freedom I’ve created.
That’s when sirens sound aloud...lights flash in my mirror...
And I fall from that number 9 cloud, as the lights get nearer.
Pull over...no choice...small town, they know my truck...
More lights arrive and surround...now I know I’m fucked.
They won’t approach my car...just flash lights on me inside...
How’d this happen...it’s so bizarre...then I snap and realize.
“Get outta the car!” they yell...”Do it slow and show us hands!”
So I open his wallet and the pictures tell...me he was her husband.
The money was hers to begin with...but she didn’t wanna share...
A single dime on married bliss, so she had herself an affair.
I was a sucker, a means to an end...took a bad fall for this whore...
Never felt more like a rag doll then when she threw me to the floor.
The End
I win.
BTK, I liked your drop, except the begining
I was kind of confused by the stuff that was
in italics, until I read the rest that is. The way you
approached the topic was well thought and it brought
a sense of easy reading to go along with it. Same old
BTK verse, nice multis and internals as you always do
have. The rhyme scheme worked, the imagery is what
got me in this drop - I loved it, it made it seem realistic
and the storyline was sick. Nice drop man.
do me a favor and leave some feed on my SS drop against
Evolve
i am very sorry B culdnt get to my comp....so i was gonna drop 2nite but turns out i wont have time and wont for a few weeks so im out for now.sorry again B
2-2 Out for now.
S'aight...shit happens.
Peace
Born To Kill wins.
K - Signed out? (PM me dude)
Close this/Give me mod abilities.