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I like the swing on this. Bass real laid back and swaggerific. The switch up is interesting i think. Just work on the sequence!

Keep it up homie.

Sounds like your new. I don't like it, but your new so its unlikely you're going to produce hot stuff from the get go. All I can say is listen to the pros. See how they compose there music. Change ups, hot melodies, everything. Jot some notes down in your head. Then go back and make a hot beat. Keep at it man.

yea agreed with Palamoon on this one.. it really sounds like ya new, but don't worry bout that too much, you'll get better wit practice. The drums are pretty dul, and the melody is pretty basic. I'd work on getting some new sounds/drums, and most importantly, keep practicing

ehh..
i liked ur other shit better
jus keep doing ur thing

Much Appreciated!

wow. the first bass part was dope, thought it was gonna turn into a westcoast dre beat, but it turned into a 16-bit super nintendo racing menu song. :( how many beats did you make before this?

Now this isn't a completely random beat lol, the consistant lags of it with the illmannered placements, can't really say much about it other then the sequencing is really off and sounds incomplete

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Originally Posted by Super Ego

but it turned into a 16-bit super nintendo racing menu song.

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That was funny lol

sounds like u just threw a bunch of stuf together.. i dont like this at all

you probably fruityloooped this how thing. it has no rhythm. you need to spend more time on beats