layin the levels

no1's leveling with me im ofta rictascale
meterphoricly speaking im the alpha male
slew eny hater from a diffrent crew then i hate ya
im reppin ntn yarmouth that ma town
mr king ill be takeing ya crown
got an individule flow
come to me if ya want that hygrade blow
no love for the law or eny kind of athority
just a wight boi raised with drugs and poverty
u may laugh at my grammer buh i speak like dis coz i was raised in a headstrong manour
i rob in hoods i am robin hood
take from the rich and give to me the poor
get in ma way it will be more than a head sore
so if ya think you can test me i will show u that im the best b
voilate ill shoot straight at ya chest g buh if ya like ma bars please invest in me


BANG, GET BACK TO ME IN PRIVET MESSEGE IF YA LIKE MA BARS OR WANA BATTLE OR WANNA LINK UP AND DO A VID

not badd...i like the rhymes you used and the flow was pretty decent. i wasnt graspin the concept though seemed more like a freestyle sorta thing. the grammar made it have a thug feel to it. overall not baddd

could use a bit of work but ok. work on tying ur barz together better with more rhyming syllables. i can tell u tried to thank outside the box for a very traditional written, but u can expand.. alot. structure could use some work, but not horrible. keep posting

cheerz boiz aprecieted :)