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@Letterman @JEM.
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LLL Season 24
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14.
Cool.
@JEM. Sent 10 to miracle
I only mentioned you cause these bars were meant for you!
Ask ya chick, I give her that clinical dick and fuck her right
When I pin her against the wall - I ain’t measuring height
Yet that loyal bitch even accepts that your manhoods a con?!
Crazy how she wanna make up, while you have hers on!
Homie… round here, you can’t win if you leaning that far
Junkie! bicycle & that’s exactly why you can’t handle bars
You need a license to pop Glocks the size of clocks
Dr.Pepper time, cuz when it flames you won’t want the shot
Went to where you claim… but nobody knew who let is
They was slamming doors as if I was there for the census
Easy.
LETTERMANS VERSE
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This nerd could really quit rap to go & act on a screen
If Jem star in a movie, he’d be a perfect fit for the kid picked last on the team
& he can’t pull bitches.. cuz when he flirts they’d rather die instead
So many bad one liners, his pick-up game could rival Zelph’s last cypher thread
For him this is a handicap match. You might have to get some help
It’s no comparison between Gemini, man.. I would’ve been better off battling myself
I gotta school money, tryna outrun a .762 when I’m squeezin the chrome
This dummy should’ve known that bullets too fasfa him, so he better leave me alone
All I anticipate from you is trash. This fag is the worst
Everytime we see you dropping Jem, we never expect you to do that in ur verse
Ask ya chick, I give her that clinical dick and fuck her right
When I pin her against the wall - I ain’t measuring height
wording isn't to die for, but i like the idea even though it's obvious you're not measuring a grown womans height
Yet that loyal bitch even accepts that your manhoods a con?!
Crazy how she wanna make up, while you have hers on!
seen too many make up flips and this didnt freshen it up
Homie… round here, you can’t win if you leaning that far
Junkie! bicycle & that’s exactly why you can’t handle bars
meh
You need a license to pop Glocks the size of clocks
Dr.Pepper time, cuz when it flames you won’t want the shot
wtf is this setup LOOOL
Went to where you claim… but nobody knew who let is
They was slamming doors as if I was there for the census
very meh
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This nerd could really quit rap to go & act on a screen
If Jem star in a movie, he’d be a perfect fit for the kid picked last on the team
haha, coo
& he can’t pull bitches.. cuz when he flirts they’d rather die instead
So many bad one liners, his pick-up game could rival Zelph’s last cypher thread
fucking fire, wording is dope too
For him this is a handicap match. You might have to get some help
It’s no comparison between Gemini, man.. I would’ve been better off battling myself
ughhh the wording and connection is so bad for how good this could have been w/ the wp. sick wp/concept tho
I gotta school money, tryna outrun a .762 when I’m squeezin the chrome
This dummy should’ve known that bullets too fasfa him, so he better leave me alone
tie ins could have worked better but once again, cool concept
All I anticipate from you is trash. This fag is the worst
Everytime we see you dropping Jem, we never expect you to do that in ur verse
simple yet effective, if it isn't played it's cool
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breakdown says it all, v/ letterman
Ask ya chick, I give her that clinical dick and fuck her right
When I pin her against the wall - I ain’t measuring height
kinda predictable but decent nonetheless
Yet that loyal bitch even accepts that your manhoods a con?!
Crazy how she wanna make up, while you have hers on!
this type of flip can be very affective but make up been done and theres nothing fresh about your twist
Homie… round here, you can’t win if you leaning that far
Junkie! bicycle & that’s exactly why you can’t handle bars
nahh
You need a license to pop Glocks the size of clocks
Dr.Pepper time, cuz when it flames you won’t want the shot
wtf this is just odd
Went to where you claim… but nobody knew who let is
They was slamming doors as if I was there for the census
not a fan
vs
This nerd could really quit rap to go & act on a screen
If Jem star in a movie, he’d be a perfect fit for the kid picked last on the team
tried looking up jem and can't find anything to tie it in with your concept. Shouldn't have to do research to try and figure out your bar. not a fan of it. perhaps its good for people know know wtf jem star is or whatever
& he can’t pull bitches.. cuz when he flirts they’d rather die instead
So many bad one liners, his pick-up game could rival Zelph’s last cypher thread
nice. current too. diggin it
For him this is a handicap match. You might have to get some help
It’s no comparison between Gemini, man.. I would’ve been better off battling myself
why would you be better off battling yourself? i like this bar but the ending punch makes it seem like you're an easier opponent than jem.
I gotta school money, tryna outrun a .762 when I’m squeezin the chrome
This dummy should’ve known that bullets too fasfa him, so he better leave me alone
couldn't find anything for fasfa. google corrects it to fafsa. miss for me
All I anticipate from you is trash. This fag is the worst
Everytime we see you dropping Jem, we never expect you to do that in ur verse
cool personal
JEM has a lot of potential but for me this verse fell mostly flat. Letterman had some nice punches and better attempts as well. I got Letterman taking it
v/letterman
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Mvgt Letterman for an overwhelming edge in everything but openers
While Jem could've made his opener BOTB with some minor wording changes and less lazy execution, it was still noteworthy. Other than that, shit was played out or missed. Dr pepp had potential but it seemed forced into a concept tbh
I was really fucking with one liners and Gemini Man from Letterman. Shoutouts to Will Smith, I enjoyed that movie
Ask ya chick, I give her that clinical dick and fuck her right
When I pin her against the wall - I ain’t measuring height
not bad. cant remember seeing this flip
Yet that loyal bitch even accepts that your manhoods a con?!
Crazy how she wanna make up, while you have hers on!
nah
Homie… round here, you can’t win if you leaning that far
Junkie! bicycle & that’s exactly why you can’t handle bars
junk he buys'll kill right? points for creativity but wording could've been better fs
You need a license to pop Glocks the size of clocks
Dr.Pepper time, cuz when it flames you won’t want the shot
not feelin this one
Went to where you claim… but nobody knew who let is
They was slamming doors as if I was there for the census
concept could work even tho it's basically a jehova witness flip, which is played to death, but either way the execution wasn't nearly harsh enough
This nerd could really quit rap to go & act on a screen
If Jem star in a movie, he’d be a perfect fit for the kid picked last on the team
ok ish, lil soft
& he can’t pull bitches.. cuz when he flirts they’d rather die instead
So many bad one liners, his pick-up game could rival Zelph’s last cypher thread
cool
For him this is a handicap match. You might have to get some help
It’s no comparison between Gemini, man.. I would’ve been better off battling myself
fire concept. gemini has been done against him but not as a movie reference as far as I know. wording could've been tweaked a little
I gotta school money, tryna outrun a .762 when I’m squeezin the chrome
This dummy should’ve known that bullets too fasfa him, so he better leave me alone
too much of a reach with the wp considered its actually fafsa
All I anticipate from you is trash. This fag is the worst
Everytime we see you dropping Jem, we never expect you to do that in ur verse
eh feels like a filler bar just to be done writing. very played np
didn't think a lot connected for JEM, his best bar was the opener which was really a jab and then it fell off from there. letterman had a couple land and was more creative.
vote CBjkdfj
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